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Monday, September 26, 2011

THROUGH THE TUNNEL

MAIN CHARACTER

The main character in t6he story is Jerry. He was an English boy aging 11 years.He was the only child to his mother. Jerry liked swimming very much. He did not listen to his mother and this lead him into troubles, when he decided to go to the beach and swim without telling his mother and he bleeded under water.

THOUGH THE TUNNEL

SETTING

The story took place during Jerry's holiday on the beach, where he stayed with his mother for some few days

2 comments:

  1. where is your plot?, and again you did alot of mistakes in your main character,just go through it!! i gave you 6

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  2. OK YOU DID SOMEHOW BAT THE FONT YOU FONT YOU USED IS NAT THE SAME.YOU WERE SUPPOSE TO MAKE THEM THE SAME. ABOUT THE SETTING YOU TALK ABOUT MANY THINGS BT ANY WAY YOU TRIED SO I WILL GIVE YOU 6/10

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